Kaelfire

I've decided to write a book, or at least part of one. I am using this blog to post it, and maybe one day if anyone ever reads this, get some good honest feedback. The books is intended as a fantasy novel in the world of Regn Delmar, an original world that is in progress along with the book.

Name: TenKey
Location: Columbus, Ohio, United States

I'm an accountant, bad gambler, wannabe writer and photographer. I read watch sports and crime dramas on TV. The Book: Kaelfire.blogspot.com The Babble: brain-pharts.blogspot.com

Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Chapter 1; Part 1

Chapter 1

14th Cycle, 8th Year of Water, 50th Day of Summer

“The dark flood did not stop with Velura but flowed south to begin the siege of Dunjaer, the host was mighty, but the city was prepared. The two great bridges of Dunjaer had been destroyed and the remaining bridge, three days to the north, was guarded by the Tutelli. Trapped on the north side of the river and unwilling to face the fearsome Tutelli, the Senza Numi built bridges to cross the Argantato. The bridges were crude things, little more than logs lashed together, but sufficient, over the course of days, to allow the Cattivi to begin crossing the river.”

The speaker stopped and beckoned with his hand. A small child jumped off his mother’s lap and ran over to the speaker, both hands wrapped around an earthenware mug. The speaker was a man of indeterminate age; his head was full of hair touched with gray. His face was shaved smooth and while not the face of a young man, was remarkably free of lines. Average height and average weight there was nothing that would make the speaker stand out in a crowd. That is, nothing except eyes the color of ice and a voice that would command the attention of kings. Taking the mug from the child the man nodded his thanks and took a long drink. The speaker set the mug on a nearby barrel set on the grass and wiped the foam from his mouth. He paused for a few moments to let his audience settle back down, and once again began to speak.

“Over the course of days, the beasts began to cross the river. Piorus, now Emperor sent the little cavalry he had to harry the beasts as they marched across the makeshift bridges. The Emperor’s Cavelli fought valiantly, slowing the crossing, but were finally forced to retreat to the city walls as the number of Cattivi became to great. The crossing lasted days, thousands of the beasts moving under the increasingly warm sun or the waning moon. A full ten-day after the beasts had arrived only about half had come across the river, over five times the number men the Emperor had to protect the walls. The new Emperor surveyed the great mass of warriors arrayed against him and knew that he could not wait out a siege. While the defenses of Dunjaer were certainly formidable, they lacked the legendary strength of Valura, which had fallen in a matter of days. Fortunately, the Emperor knew something he hoped the beasts did not. A messenger had made it to safety inside the city walls and had brought hope with him. The southern Guerriri were only two days march from the city and were moving quickly. The reinforcements certainly would not make the numbers even, but they would cut the odds against the Empire in half, and he had to hope that would be enough. The Emperor called his captains and generals to his side and they began to make plans, in two days time they would sally out of the city and attack the Senza Numi who had brought war to their homes.”

While the cities of the Empire might celebrate the Feast of Fire more lavishly, nowhere was it celebrated with more enthusiasm than this particular town. This particular town went by the name of Giana, and was located in the center of the triangle made by Kandar, Dunjaer, and Elisward , just outside of the lands claimed by the Sae-Tel. While the horse-lords tended to deal harshly with trespassers, they largely remained on their own lands and the town prospered, well protected on all sides. Giana was in an ideal location, the perfect place for caravans to stop and restock supplies as they traveled from one end of the Empire to the other. The town had doubled in size over the past fifteen years and was still growing quickly.

“The two days passed slowly for the warriors who spent the time sharpening weapons and preparing their armor. Time passed much more quickly, however, for the lords of the Empire who had much planning to do and precious little time to do it. The plan that evolved over the course of two days was simple in its design, but very ambitious in its scope. The whole of the army would march out of the gates in the hours before dawn and prepare their lines of battle. Footmen would advance on the enemy’s center while archers would pepper the lines of the Senza Numi and the remaining cavalry would guard the infantry’s flanks. After the two armies were fully engaged a single arrow would be lit and sent aloft and that would be the signal for the Empire’s second army to charge in the Cattivi’s rear. When the night gave way to the dawn the beasts were surprised to see the Emperor’s army arrayed before them and barely had time to form a ragged line before the Empire began its advance on the horde. The plan was executed flawlessly and the defenders of Dunjaer engaged the enemy and held while the signal was given to the waiting army. Soon after the southern Guerriri, led by Hyorn Steelheart, lowered their long lances and charged in to the beasts[3]. The battle was short and brutal, enraged at the loss of Valura, the warriors of the Numi Godere slaughtered the foul creatures that had defiled their cities. Broken, the beasts fled back across the bridges that had once borne them to the attack. Thousands were slaughtered in the route, but Piorus and Hyorn wisely held their men on the south bank of the river, for they were still sorely outnumbered. They had won the day, but the battle was far from over. More than sixty thousands of the invaders sat on the north bank, three times the combined number of the Empire’s warriors, and they would not be easily persuaded to leave.”

Though the Feast of Fire would not begin until the coming dawn, the townsfolk sat silently around fires ringing the city, listening with rapt attention as storytellers wove their tales and passed the night. Different stories would be told at each of the fires according to the wishes of both the teller and the told, but at each fire the story of the Ombra Diluvio, the Dark Flood, would be told and nobody told it better than Arilyn. The storyteller was something of an enigma in the town, none of the elders could remember him being born in the town and nobody ever remembered him living in Giana, but he returned to the town for every summer festival.

Lots were prepared by the city’s elders and drawn by the mayor to see who would have the pleasure of sitting at Arilyn’s fire, and if the Elders’ lots were drawn more often, no one ever complained. For only the second time in his young life, Dunraelus sat with his family at Arilyn’s fire. Fifteen years ago, according to his parents, Dunraelus had sat on his mother’s knee and listened to the storyteller work his art. He had been only two at the time and couldn’t remember the evening though his mother swore he never made a noise or slept a wink during the night, that he had stared at the tale weaver with attention exceedingly rare in one so young. Dunraelus listened now, with equal attention, as Arilyn continued his tale.

“For months the armies sat facing each other across the river, shooting arrows whenever an enemy wandered in to range, but without any major bloodletting. Piorus had tried a number of ideas to push the Senza Numi in to retreat, but none had led to success. His first idea had been to construct catapults and attack the horde with stones. His warriors and engineers labored for days to build the massive engines of war which, when completed, killed several dozen of the enemy before they simply moved out of range. He even called upon the mages of Kandar who responded by sending a few of their more war-like practitioners to the battle. The magic users spent hours each day raining fire and lighting, acid and ice against the invaders but they were too few and the enemy too many. After the mages collapsed, exhausted, for the third consecutive day, Piorus sent them back to Kandar to strengthen the city’s defenses.”

The speaker paused here, and took a deep breath before continuing.

“The months passed and the stalemate drug on until the morning a scout came running in to Dunjaer’s great hall, interrupting Piorus’ and Hyron’s breakfast. The scout’s clothes were torn and more than a bit of blood covered the remaining cloth and exposed skin. The scout took a second to catch his breath and gulp down a mug of wine before speaking, “Majesty, the enemy approaches!”
Hyron roared to his feet, “They are crossing the bridges?” The scout shook his head from side to side, “No my lord, they approach from the southeast! I was scouting with my unit along the shore of Mirror Lake when we were ambushed by a group of the beasts. We fled immediately, hoping to bring back word to the camp, but we were too slow and only I survived.” Screams and the clash of iron could now be heard in the hall and both Emperor and Hero grabbed those weapons they had near to hand and charged out of the hall. The sight that greeted them as they topped the walls nearly stopped their hearts.”

There wasn’t a single person around the campfire who didn’t know what scene lay before the Emperor and yet each person waited, straining to hear the voice of the storyteller as he described the carnage.

“A regiment of Cattivi, several thousand strong had managed to place themselves between the camp of the southern Guerriri and the walls of Dunjaer. They had caught the southerners completely unprepared and were wreaking havoc. The overrun warriors struggled to halt the onslaught and pulled themselves in groups ranging in size from a couple dozen warriors to a few hundred. As they fought for survival more of the Senza Numi streamed across the makeshift bridges, some carrying ladders others carrying only swords and spears. The Emperor surveyed the scene with dismay, for he knew if the southern Guerriri broke it would only take the beasts a short time to take the city. As the soldiers outside of the city walls fought for their life, the Emperor ordered the defenders to assemble in the courtyard and prepare to assault the horde. In moments the soldiers were ready and the Emperor ordered them out of the gate and in to the fray. The Emperor’s attack opened a corridor through the enemy regiment in front of the wall and the first of the emerging warriors fought towards the largest grouping of southern warriors, while the trailing line of warriors exiting the city fought to keep the corridor open. The fighting was fierce and the Emperor’s men struggled to hold their formations against the press of the enemy. The Guerriri struggled to reach their surrounded brothers and finally the leading warriors broke through. Hyron pressed past the Emperor and spoke quickly to one of his captains, the highest ranking officer he could find in the group. After a moment of conversation he broke off and ran back to the Emperor. “Sire, we must get back to the safety of the walls, we can hold them for eternity if needs be, but we cannot now keep the Cattivi on the northern bank of the river.” The emperor quickly nodded his assent and orders were given to make haste back in to the city.

The Emperor’s army began to fold back in on its self as the leading elements made their way through the corridor being held open by the last soldiers to leave the city. The Emperor and his men were within bowshot of the city when disaster struck. Lumbering giants, half again the size of a large man crashed in to the soldiers closest to the gate. The Emperor’s men fought hard to hold their ground, but were driven back. Rather than enter the city the giants pressed the attack, forcing the Guerriri further away from the safety of the city. With a cry of rage Hyron Steelheart charged the ogres, soldiers of the Empire only steps behind him. The ferocity of the counter-attack ground the ogres advance to a halt, but the Emperor’s men were not able to break through. Aware of the situation, the Emperor order his men to move in to defensive positions, as best as they were able. After a time and with great difficulty the Guerriri arranged themselves in to a massive square surrounded on all sides by an enemy that was still growing in numbers”

The fire cracked and popped and Arilyn leaned forward, his arms moving with the story, but nobody saw them. Every man, woman and child in the audience was focused on his eyes, they seemed to be burning so intensely that it was easy to believe that the fire was not being reflected in his eyes, but rather was the reflection.

“For the rest of the day and through the night the armies fought. The Senza Numi sent wave after wave against the lines of soldiers and wave after wave was repulsed with the Emperor’s men standing defiant. Around midmorning the attacks stopped and the warriors of the Senza Numi pulled back from the lines of Guerriri and waited. The waiting lasted until almost noon when the northern lines of the Cattive split and a single figure walked towards the soldiers of the Empire. The figure stopped a mere hundred feet from the lines of the Numi Godere and raised his hand, “Piorus, do you know me?” The Emperor stepped through his own lines and faced the figure with his back straight and chin raised, “I know you Kael, and you will not have this city.” Kael threw back his head and laughed, a terrible sound, a sound that chilled every soldier on the field. “Piorus, the city is already mine, it is your lives I wish to bargain for, serve me and live, refuse and die” The Emperor shook his head slowly, “Your offer is no bargain, and we will have no part of it. Do your worst Kael, and we shall do our best.” The field was silent as Kael raised his fist above his head, the fist was wreathed in flame and as his mouth opened he yelled with a voice like thunder. As he began to bring his fist towards the ground his yell became a shriek, a sound so loud it brought warriors to their knees, man and beast alike. Kael fell to his knees, one hand on the ground, the other at his side gripping an arrow protruding from his body. He raised his head and lifted his hand from the ground, pointing it towards the line of Guerriri. A man stood out from the rest of the line, with a bow held at rest in front of him. As Kael raised his hand the man began to scream, then to smoke, and finally he burst in to flame. As the Emperor and his men looked on, horrified, Kael picked himself up and stumbled back through his lines. A moment more passed before the beasts let out a cry and once again charged the Numi Godere lines. As the charge crashed in to the Emperor’s line a horn could barely be heard above the din, then the fighting men realized, not one horn, but scores. Line after line of horsemen appeared on the horizon, charging towards the battle. The first group of horsemen broke off their charge and began sweeping along the flank of the Senza Numi, peppering them with arrows, the line behind them crashed in to the army, made a few stabs with their spears and wheeled away. This attack was repeated over and over with devastating effect. The Emperor’s men fought with renewed energy and began to push back the beasts. With agonizing slowness the Cattivi were being pushed toward the river. The horsemen had cleared the rear and flanks of the Emperor’s army and were now pressing along the flanks of the enemy, herding them as they forced back. Finally the battle turned, the Senze Numi broke and fled towards the river. The horsemen pursued them as far as the water, but pulled up short of crossing. This was no withdrawal, the enemy was broken and the siege lifted. Many of the Guerriri slumped to the ground, immediately falling asleep with exhaustion, but they had won and the Empire was again safe.”

Arilyn leaned back in his chair all intensity gone from his countenance as a smile broke across his face, “That is why the Sae-Tel are citizens of the Empire, “ the crowd immediately responded, “Honor to the Sae-Tel.”

As Dunraelus worked himself out of the story, he looked around and noticed that the night had all but passed and dawn loomed just moments away. The night had been more than he dared hope for and now it was time to begin the Feast of Fire.



[3] At this time it bears note that the Guerriri of the Empire vary by region. The summer heat in the Kandar region of the Empire makes fighting in heavy armor nearly impossible, therefore the armies have developed around speed and discipline. The cooler climate of the south, along with a history of border disputes with the Elysites, had led the Empire’s warriors to adopt the heavier armor favored by the Elysites.

Tuesday, December 13, 2005

Prologue

Alright- I know this is a repost but for continuity I am reposting it anyway...

Prologue

10th Cycle, 6th Year of Chaos, 20th Day of Spring[1]

Emperor Solaris Entedore IV, King of Valura, Steward of Numi Goderi and the 28th Emperor to bear that name gazed at the cloud of dust just visible over the horizon, “Ayiir, how long until they arrive?”
The young warrior turned toward the Emperor, “No more than 3 days milord.” The Emperor shook his head sadly, “There is no way that the Guerriri will make it here in time and the Kandarans will need every warrior, send a runner to Dunjaer, tell them to hold the Guerriri and prepare for siege.”
“My Lord?” gasped the warrior, “Surely you don’t mean to give up?”

Legend has long held that the Entedore line had mixed with that of elves somewhere in centuries past, and the current representative seemed proof of the tale. At 56 years of age Solaris had been born in the first year of the current cycle and stood unbent. “No, we will not surrender, we will not give up, and we will not win. We will make war on the Senza Numi and we will take hold of as many of them as we can, and fling them in to Chaos before we settle in to eternity.”

No more than 5 tendays had passed since the Empire had existed in relative peace. Other than occasional raids from the island barbarians in the north, the horse savages in the east and border disputes with the Elysites in the south, citizens of the Empire were safe and secure. Then the Senza Numi had coming from seemingly nowhere. Telura, Saval, and Syrah, 3 of the North’s 5 great cities had been razed before anyone knew what was happening. Monteceen had fallen before the northern Guerriri could be brought together and what remained of the Emperor’s army brought against the invading host.

Wave after wave of the beasts crashed against the ordered ranks of the Guerriri. They fought with mace and club, spear and axe, fury and rage. The Guerriri fought with shield and sword, discipline and courage and for a few moments looked like they might take the field against the gruesome creatures. Looked like they might take the day until 10 foot giants waded in to the tight formation breaking men and formations with tree-like clubs. The monsters flooded in to the breaks and Solaris was forced to call the retreat.

The Emperor’s Cavelli, cavalry who fought with spears and sabers, guarded the retreat, and died to a man. It took 5 days for the Emperor’s Guerriri to reach the walls of Valura City, but the brave Cavelli had bought them precious time.

10th Cycle, 6th Year of Chaos, 27th Day of Spring

Solaris’ arm was weary, his men were weary, and the walls were slick with blood. The sun was at the peak of its ascent and under other circumstances it would have been a beautiful, if chilly, day. But these were not other circumstances and this noon marked the 4th day of relentless assaults upon Valura’s walls. The Senza Numi, the godless, had rested for only a few hours after reaching the city, using the time to build crude ladders and to cut down a massive oak as a battering ram. The ram had never reached the walls but the forest of ladders could only be delayed for day before the first of the beasts had topped the walls.

The instant that gruesome foot touched the stone on top of the wall the Guerriri knew that battle could not be won. They also knew that every day they held was one more day for the Kandars and Selians to prepare Dunjaer for the attack that would follow just over a tenday after Valura fell. It would also be one more day for their families and the survivors of the great cities to reach relative safety across the Fiume Argantato[2].

Valura would not, however, fall easily. Built into the side of a mountain there were 5 walls that would need to be breached before an invader would be able to assault the citadel near the top of the mountain. The city was ancient when the Empire was young and no human hands placed the stones one atop another, so skillfully done it looked as if the walls were carved out of the mountain itself. How Valura had come in to the keeping of man was a secret lost in time. Though man had not built the great city, it was the Valurian’s home and they made the Senza Numi pay dearly for every wall they overran. The defenders were now at the City’s second wall and though their numbers were only a fraction what they had been four days ago there was less wall to be assaulted.

Solaris looked around and saw that, for the moment, the walls were clear of enemies and there were no more scaling the ladders. There had been precious few of these moments, moments where the enemy would pull back and regroup before making another assault. The lulls never lasted more than a few hours before waves of invaders again began to crash, and break, against the stout walls. Early in the battle Solaris had done his best to rotate the men on duty at the top of the walls to give them a rest, whenever possible. This was not a concern for whatever dark creature was leading the Senza Numi, their numbers were such that no foul beast would have had to charge the walls twice in the days of battle. Solaris almost called for Ayiir before sadly shaking his head. Ayiir had been killed during the retread from the 4th wall. He had pitched forward during the flight, a fouled barbed shaft protruding from his back.

Since Ayiir had fallen a grizzled veteran had served in his stead, despite his best efforts Solaris could not remember the man’s name but he didn’t seem to mind. Seeing the Emperor looking around the rough warrior strode over, “Sir?”
“Quickly, while we have a moment, get some food in to the men and have the officers count how many of us remain.” Solaris knew the men would not live long enough to starve and that there could not possibly be enough men remaining to hold off the horde for more than a day or two, but it reassured both him and his men to perform such routines.

A few hours passed and still the beasts had not made another attempt upon the walls. Solaris knew something was coming, something new, something terrible. He also knew he would not have to wait much longer to find out what it was. A double rank of the enemy marched towards the 2nd wall and stopped just out of bowshot. Solaris chuckled without humor; they had been out of arrows for two days now and had been doing their best to return the enemy’s arrows to their previous owners.

The enemy lines split down the center and a figure strode through the ranks that would have haunted the nightmares of every man on the walls. The figure appeared to be a man, a large man, but a man. The man was covered from head to toe in armor that seemed to be reflecting the image of a large fire, the image was so powerful Solaris was sure that if his hand was to pass near that armor it would surely be burned. The man stepped forward and removed his helmet, uncovering the most terrifying beautiful face any of the Guerriri had ever seen. Shoulder length brown hair framed a dark skinned face with eyes that could be seen to burn across the no man’s land between the warring armies. “You have fought bravely and well,” the voice was course and easily heard. It was as if the strange man was standing across a small room, rather than hundreds of feet away. “You have fought well, but you have denied me my home for too long and have killed too many of my warriors. You will die now, but I will promise you one thing, you’re bodies will not be desecrated by these warriors you see beside me. You will be purified in fire and your ashes returned to the earth.”

The dark man raised his hand above his head and what appeared to be fire wreathed around it. With a scream the man fell to his knees and brought his fist violently against the earth. A thunder, deeper than the most violent storm, echoed through the mountain. As the thunder began to fade away the top of the mountain exploded, showering the Guerriri and the Senza Numi alike with rocks and other debris. When Solaris was again able to see through the dust he wished he could have died along side Ayiir. Washing down the mountain and over the Citadel was a wave of liquid fire. The river of fire crashed in to the Citadel’s wall and sprayed over it, covering the distance between the walls and rushing towards the stunned Guerriri. Turning his back to the rushing doom, Solaris looked over the parapet, “Who are you?” he called to the masked figure.

“Kael” was the response.

“Not godless after all,” was the last thought of Solaris’ life.


A man stood on the wall of Dunjaer facing north. A cool gust of wind blew across the man’s bald pate and forced his loose black clothing against his body. He opened his eyes and turned towards the warrior in silvered armor standing next to him. “It is over my lord,” the man turned to face the people gathered in the courtyard below. Lifting his chin he announced, “ALL HAIL EMPEROR PIORUS, first of the line of Vincitor, prepare for war.”


[1] Mariva’s Calendar is the most commonly used Calendar on Regn Delmar. Cycles are groupings of 50 years that are further broken down in to 10 year increments, 4 of which are assigned to a Power and the 5th to Chaos. A year is made up of 4 seasons, each with 100 days.
[2] When the first refugees arrived from Telura, Saval, and Syrah, Emperor Solaris ordered the citizens of Valura to flee to Dunjaer. The refugees consisted primarily of women and children and arrived without incident, save an attack by a small band of Goblins who were beaten back by a few old warriors sent along with the refugees and the women.

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